Dear David,
The trouble with this for me is that it is all so abstract that I can't
connect with it.
What is the laughter of pain, or the laughter of pain in darkness? It just
feels like a collection of 'poetic' phrases to me. Sorry to be so negative,
but it just doesn't convince or engage me on any level.
Kind regards,
grasshopper
----- Original Message -----
From: "D.C Bursey" <[log in to unmask]>
Sent: Wednesday, January 22, 2003 4:01 PM
Subject: [THE-WORKS] Lost from view
> The laughter of pain
> in darkness reigns
> as my sun bleeds.
>
> Foundations of bone,
> now limestone,
> cement hope.
>
> I dissolve in the cavern
> deep in the mountain
> of my mind.
>
> Your eyes
> cannot absorb
> my light.
>
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