Oh Dean, I will have to re-think my vocation, then.
SallyE
on 17/10/03 3:15 am, RDL at [log in to unmask] wrote:
> Sally, this is not a poem. It's not bad prose (although there are some
> spelling and sentence errors) but there is nothing here to make this a
> poem. You need to do some reading, and probably get some good books on
> poetry. You need to become informed about device, metaphor, and in
> general, clues about what poetry says that prose cannot.
> -Dean
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