Hi Mike,
Yeh!
I keep wondering about the word "unconscionable" - maybe because I can't
remember ever coming across it before... (maybe I should just stand up,
wander over the the shelf where the dictionaries are kept and look for it!
I'm sometimes just too lazy...)
And I wonder it "Wind!" ought to have a comma after it (do you think it
changes possible meanings if it has?)
But I like what I find here!
Bob
>From: Mike Horwood <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: New sub: Wind
>Date: Thu, 16 Oct 2003 16:27:55 +0300
>
>Wind
>
>Magnificent, the wind! racing through
>the branches of this brave new morning,
>out of the unconscionable stillness,
>headlong into the prison-house wall.
>
>
>
>Mike
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