> Hello Christina,
Thanks for your comments, which I will think about over the weekend. Letting rip, eh? Maybe I should sing along with those chairs ;-)
Best wishes, Mike
> From: Christina Fletcher <[log in to unmask]>
> Date: 2003/10/17 Fri AM 12:25:37 EEST
> To: [log in to unmask]
> Subject: Re: New sub: Musical chairs
>
> I think this might be more interesting in the first person. It feels to me
> like a beginning: it stays in too safe, comfortable and fairly predictable zone.
> I wonder how it would develop if you let rip?
> bw
> christina
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> > Musical Chairs
> >
> > At first he had not realised
> > just how musical his chairs were.
> > They had various obscure talents
> > and were in secret communication
> > with desirable elements
> > in his environment.
> >
> > One morning in July, the air
> > fairly pulsed with excitement
> > as he warmed himself, and the chairs
> > beat time with a rhythm as even
> > as a message in code.
> >
> > Little birds sang the accompaniment,
> > the tree swayed, the mat was astonished
> > and the walls felt betrayed.
> >
> > For him it was all a game.
> > Ignorance, in the midst of so much
> > knowledge, was the price he paid.
> >
> >
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> >
> > Mike
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