Only spelling I'd query is 'nostalgical' and I'm well known as a pedant.
Roger
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From: "RDL" <[log in to unmask]>
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Sent: Friday, October 17, 2003 3:15 AM
Subject: Re: New Sub: The Tiger's Poem
> Sally, this is not a poem. It's not bad prose (although there are some
> spelling and sentence errors) but there is nothing here to make this a
> poem. You need to do some reading, and probably get some good books on
> poetry. You need to become informed about device, metaphor, and in
> general, clues about what poetry says that prose cannot.
> -Dean
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