Dear Sue,
Happiness should never be ignored.
bw
SallyE
on 12/10/03 5:08 pm, Sue Scalf at [log in to unmask] wrote:
> I sent it to a friend this morning who is a great critic. She basically told
> me that as it stands it is a piece of junk. The last stanza needs extensive
> revision. When it is finished and perhaps worth something I will send it
> again. Sorry. Sue
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