I like it a lot: wistful and atmospheric.
S2, L3 seems a little prosaic.
Best regards,
David
----- Original Message -----
From: "Mike Horwood" <[log in to unmask]>
To: <[log in to unmask]>
Sent: 08 October 2003 09:16
Subject: New sub: Early autumn
> Early Autumn
>
> The day breathes
> through an open window.
> These days are clear
> as water and as silent.
> They have no conscience.
>
> In the slow afternoon
> a red sail crosses the bay.
> Birds gather on their way south.
> They leave no solace
> behind them.
>
>
>
> Mike
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