Interesting.
Suggest you substitute "perched" for "sat" in L1 and 7, and "as" for "like"
in L2.
In L4, should be lambs'.
Best regards,
David
----- Original Message -----
From: "Bob Cooper" <[log in to unmask]>
To: <[log in to unmask]>
Sent: 07 October 2003 12:01
Subject: The Chest Freezer
Things seem really quiet right now... (and I think I'd prefer this one to
appear among a host of others!).
But here it is for some C & C:
The Chest Freezer
Sat on the lid, feeling the warmth at your back,
sobbing like only a seventeen-year-old can sob,
not saying anything out loud, not hearing the hum
from behind the trembling chickens, lamb’s hearts,
sausages, livers, profiteroles - and the Haagen Daas
which is all the comfort food a body needs
when sat on the freezer, feeling the warmth.
Bob Cooper
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