Hello Grasshopper,
This is great fun. I wasn´t quite sure what I was reading first time through S1 and was vastly afraid that I was once again not getting it, as so many times before. But it all began to fall into place as I entered S2, when the phrase `Twas brillig´ crept into my cranium. I enjoyed it a lot. You´ve got some lovely sounds and invented words in here. At least, I think they´re invented (?)
Best wishes, Mike
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> Lähettäjä: grasshopper <[log in to unmask]>
> Päiväys: 2003/09/27 la AM 03:23:51 GMT+03:00
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> Aihe: New sub: The Pismire Solution
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> The Pismire Oration
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> I'm here again with a new pome. Crits of others' poems tomorrow...
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> The Pismire Solution
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> Kreck, kreck, the Plumeys have been down pick pick
> again. The valley-balls, the lupes, the liplap danglers
> are all mussled and distrayed. Who was scooting
> on the oakmost roam, and did not give the larum
> looid to beware us? We could all have been mordered
> in our buds, culled in curls and couchings.
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> O my simlings, gather round in heedance.
> First we must brush and bellish, make bloomheads
> clean and sparkish, then we can cusp and susp
> and I will tale you tellings of long days ago,
> stores of queens and trells and hellent warfor.
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> Ho, hard there, fattyfiller, with your seggy bodments,
> do not munge upon these leaves. Peel off
> and mandicate elsewhere. This pliant plot,
> this green clingdom, this is our heapsake,
> our hill-land, our jewel set in a sylvan lea.
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> Rejuice, my simlings, simsters.We'll browse avids
> on the fallage, surp meet mead nectar soon.
> All life is ground and gladly - part from Plumeys.
> May Magog smart the flockers from the highs.
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> (grasshopper)
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