In a message dated 09/27/2003 2:42:29 PM Central Daylight Time,
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<< For instance, 'a change of seasons, change of lovers' -I feel that needs
the
article for the music, and I wonder why you clipped.Also, how about a
variation, like 'a shift of lovers' or similar? >>
Grassy, I repeated change for the musical effect. I will go back and look at
where articles might help. I am always aware of music and a speaking voice,
but didn't want this to be too conversational. I wonder if the sound jarred on
anyone else.You have made me re-think. And I thank you for making me look
and listen again.
Sue
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