Thank you Bob, for the suggestions and yes it is a found poem and I should have
probably posted it as that
I like the Idea of the rhymes but I feared to lighten Einstien's quote
Thank you very much for all your help, with my writing
davidc
Bob Cooper wrote:
> Hi David,
> A powerful poem!
> Pithy, pointed, and a four liner I doubt I'll forget. If the first line
> ended in "enquired," and the second ended with "won" it would be reciteably
> memorably rhymy as well! Whaddya think?
> Bob
>
> >From: "D.C Bursey" <[log in to unmask]>
> >Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
> >To: [log in to unmask]
> >Subject: WW4
> >Date: Mon, 20 Jan 2003 01:19:49 -0330
> >
> >A world war 2 reporter asked,
> >how will the third world war be fought?
> >Einstien shook his head and replied,
> >the fourth will be with sticks and stones.
>
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