Hi grassy,
Yeh, you've got a point!
Perhaps, tho, the repeating's making it a Found Poem?
Bob
>From: grasshopper <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Re: WW4
>Date: Tue, 21 Jan 2003 00:30:49 -0000
>
>Dear Bob,
> I can't see how retelling an well-known anecdote about Einstein in four
>lines counts as an original poem ,or even a poem. Have I missed something?
> Yes, it was a pithy remark from Einstein, but it is Einstein's insight
>and
>wit.
>Kind regards,
> grasshopper
>
>----- Original Message -----
>From: "Bob Cooper" <[log in to unmask]>
>Sent: Tuesday, January 21, 2003 12:07 AM
>Subject: Re: [THE-WORKS] WW4
>
>
> > Hi David,
> > A powerful poem!
> > Pithy, pointed, and a four liner I doubt I'll forget. If the first line
> > ended in "enquired," and the second ended with "won" it would be
>reciteably
> > memorably rhymy as well! Whaddya think?
> > Bob
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> > >From: "D.C Bursey" <[log in to unmask]>
> > >Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
> > >To: [log in to unmask]
> > >Subject: WW4
> > >Date: Mon, 20 Jan 2003 01:19:49 -0330
> > >
> > >A world war 2 reporter asked,
> > >how will the third world war be fought?
> > >Einstien shook his head and replied,
> > >the fourth will be with sticks and stones.
> >
> >
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