I got your thanks,
thanks,
Colin
----- Original Message -----
From: "Sue Scalf" <[log in to unmask]>
To: <[log in to unmask]>
Sent: Saturday, September 13, 2003 3:01 PM
Subject: Re: Cocooned by Cornfields (wip) (Bob)
> See my recent revision. I hope it is a little better now. I thanked
Colin,
> Barbara, and Mike, but I don't see where my letter got to them. This mail
is
> funny business at times. At any rate, I am thankful to all and hope the
> revision helped. The iron lung reference was, of course, to that awful
cylinder
> that small children had to use in order to breath when polio was so
rampant,
> especially in hot summers. I made several small changes and got the moon
out of
> the last line for one. I didn't want the poem to reek with nostalgia, but
it
> was nostalgic for a time and place and conditions that are gone forever.
> Hugs, Sue
>
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