Hello Sue,
Thanks for your comments. Yes, the other stanzas - S1, S4, S5 - remain unchanged, just these two have been revised. By the way, I havenīt seen any postings from you for quite a while, have you been away/off line/busy or have I not been receiving some post? I just wonder in case it might seem that I have not replied to comments addressed to me.
Best wishes, Mike
Are you keeping the other stanzas? I like the part about his talking to the
furniture. What you have here is good, though brief. Sue
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