Hi Frank,
I'm so sorry! I haven't even passed a copmment on any of the blackie or the
ms e poems so far! It's not that I don't like them! I do! I do!!!
I sort of feel they're all working as a piece as well as seperately, too. I
guess I should print them all off and read them in sequence - and I've been
away and, since then, have been fairly busy... (ah, excuses!! excuses!!).
Sometimes poems just keep appearing like they seem to be for you - maybe
stimulating the next one to appear, maybe appearing from nowhere known yet
still linking into what's already appeared. It's a fine place for a writer
to be! - Writes a jealous guy who remembers what it's like when it's
happening.
Bob
>From: Frank Faust <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Re: sub - ms e considers s-s-sensuality - Colin
>Date: Fri, 5 Sep 2003 09:09:20 +1000
>
>Hi Colin,
>
>Thanks for comments. Yes, I thought the 'biting' bit worked ok, thanks for
>confirming. I'm heading off now for a couple of days up the country and
>will, I think, take the whole series to date (blackie and Ms e) along for a
>revision and a think. There are 21 'blackie' pieces and about a dozen of ms
>e. I'm hoping to get some more of Ms e to approximately match the blackie's
>and then to do a sequence where they meet and form a relationship -
>something like that, anyway.
>
>I'm a little worried I may be losing my thread, so a big review might put
>it back on track for me.
>
>Oops, prattling on with more than you want to know, I'm sure.
>
>Cheers and thanks,
>
>Frank
>
>
> Frank,
>
> A sensous poem. I like the middle part especially, from "trying to learn
>a person" to "as if to bite me".
>
> Colin
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