Maybe dandelions do speak their mind. I'm uncertain about both these lines
but the first isn't as tricky as the second which I can't help reading as
humourous. --Christina
Actually, I see the d-lions as doing as they wish, the grow everywhere in
several different varieties. They are The Weed.
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it made me feel your compassion for the world, and re affirmed my own, --Ann
Thanks, not everyone agrees. Others find it a list and not all that
affirming, but we know them, don't we? (g)
Seriously, the bit has kind of grabbed me. Where I should be letting it
marinate, I keep tweaing.
Thanks.
Gary
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sí, balas no!
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