Ryfkah,

Thanks for taking the time to pass this on, poet sister. I'll have a think
about this.

Colin


----- Original Message -----
From: "Ryfkah *" <[log in to unmask]>
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Sent: Thursday, August 28, 2003 1:58 AM
Subject: Re: prepositions/Ryfkah


> In a message dated 08.27.03 11:35:40 AM, [log in to unmask] writes:
>
> << Ryfkah,
>
>
> Prepositions and prepositional phrases pop up a few times in my poems and
I'm
> still trying to work out what they are so that I can make informed
judgements
> in the future. You and Arthur gave me one or two pointers last time, but
I'm
> not there yet.  Could you give me a couple of examples of prepositional
> phrases and how they might be reworded to overcome the problems associated
with
> them? No worries if you haven't time.
>
>
>
> Thanks,
>
>
>
> Colin >>
>
> Shalom Colin,
>
> I am in the throws of setting up for school; these are two examples that
come
> to mind off the top of my head:
>
> I sang to the tune of the morning.
> I sang morning's tune.
>
> kol tuv, Ryfkah
>
> The rain splattered on the ground.
> The rain splattered earthward.
>