Hi Ryfkah,
Thank you.
Interesting point. I hope to develop this character further and I suspect
that allusion, rather than metaphor will be fairly prominent, though I'll
have to wait and see how they come out, to be sure.
Watch the space, I guess.
Cheers and again, thank you.
Frank
> I like the character very much, but I wanted some metaphor in the poem.
It
> was too much film noir and not enough poetry for me.
>
> kol tuv, Ryfkah
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