Miss Margaret, you done did good as the kids say. :-)
kol tuv, Ryfkah
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<< Ryfkah and Sue,
Glad you liked it.
It's a first draft, and I've already revised it to give the octave the
traditional Petrarchan 2 rhyme-scheme, by substituting veer/steer for
yearn/turn.
Kind regards,Maz >>
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