I THINK YOU ARE TAKING A SWIPE AT THOUGHT DISORDER, AND A GOOD ONE AT THAT,
BUT IMO SO MUCH POETRY AVAILABLE NOWADAYS IS LIKE THOUGHT DISORDER THAT THIS
DOESN'T STAND OUT ON ITS OWN. FORTUNATELY THE CONTEXT PROVIDED BY THE REST
OF THE POEM CLARIFIES THAT IS A PROTAGONIST WITH A "PROBLEM", RATHER THAN A
POET EXERCISING THEIR RIGHT TO LOSSEN THE ASSOCIATION BETWEEN PHRASES.
--Colin
Colin, no swipes meant at all. My goal is a set of three poems for the
blackie's back story. After that I'll leave it to Frank if he goes anywhere
with it. Each of these approved by him first btw.
Thanks.
Gary
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