Artful ending; I like this narrative. I like the images that create the
story. This is a great simile: strewing words like dragon-teeth . I don't quite
get the title.
kol tuv, Ryfkah
In a message dated 08.15.03 10:55:55 PM, [log in to unmask]
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She holds that soundless moment
before the blast, balled on her tongue,
caged in her teeth. >>
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