Anti, good but suggestions
Long ago,
watching the muddy Delta flow,
you waited for Charlie,
like John Wayne
for John Ford's Indians. (here I want a verb - stood for or the like
You never came home again.
Now, somewhere unpronounceable,
the son you never had (nice)
wonders about coming home, (period)
the when and how: (cap the)
body bag
or walking wounded?
Thanks.
Gary
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