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Re: Dusk Raga
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Ryfkah * <[log in to unmask]>
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The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
Date:
Sun, 10 Aug 2003 13:53:52 EDT
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I like the sounds here: assonance, consonance, and alliteration. I also like the end line: The faster beats the heart. So fast. So fast. Your line breaks are interesting, sometimes jarring. kol tuv (all that is good), Ryfkah
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