Shalom my poetsister,
In a message dated 08.08.03 10:14:53 AM, [log in to unmask]
writes:
<< This poem is about something
I do not wish to consider - like
confessions of impermanence,
shifts in stress, the sliced corners
of my sight. >>
I like these lines; the poem should begin:
Something I do not wish to consider - like
confessions of impermanence,
shifts in stress, the sliced corners
of my sight.
I do not like this form particularly. I don't think a poet has to tell the
reader what a poem is about or not about.
kol tuv, Ryfkah
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