Just one Barbara for this excellent piece. I've done it in the text and only
a suggestion..
bw
James
>From: Barbara Ostrander <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: new sub: Eye Contact
>Date: Thu, 2 Jan 2003 18:21:41 EST
>
>
>Dear List,
>
>Happy New Year. One of my New Year's resolutions is to make hard copies of
>all my poetry to paste in a book, so I will be going back through my poetry
>to submit here for final critiques. I would appreciate your help with this
>process. Some of them you may have seen before and I apologize ahead of
>time
>for that.
>
>I welcome all thoughts and suggestions.
>Barbara Ostrander
>
>
>Eye Contact
>
>gaze deep
>beneath the gauze of filtered light
>concealed within laugh lines or wounded stare
(concealed in laughter lines or a wounded stare)
>you'll see a story of normalcy or insanity
>a story of over and under activity
>a story of battle or peace
>of action or reaction
>a chemical story
>a nerve story
>
>all drafted in a mix of blue green or brown
>within the eyes
>
>BBO
>©7/30/02
>
>
>"The eye is the window of the soul."
>
>
>
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