Ryfkah,
There are some lovely images here, from start to finish.
However...... "flowers sing under white stones"? It has such an important
role to play in the poem and I wonder if it could be a clean and lovely as
the images that appear elsewhere. Even "flowers lie beside white stones"
????
Colin
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Sent: Friday, August 01, 2003 3:52 AM
Subject: New: Flowers Sing Under White Stones
> Flowers Sing Under White Stones
>
> The copper rufus darts to gather sugar-water
> daunts other hummingbirds
>
> Lavender seduces bees
> moths butterflies
>
> Near dawn elk devour roses
>
> Monsoons douse the mountainside
>
> God Bless America croons over FM radio
>
> Another warrior dies for God and country
> as flowers sing under white stones
>
> Ryfkah 7/31/03
>
> http://www.horseplainsphoto.com/rufus.htm
>
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