Hands over head
Hands by the side
Hands swirled around
CS, good read. A couple of possible edits but so minor as to leave alone.
I do wonder if you could play with this on the page to see if could sway,
dance a bit instead of standing along one side.
Smiles and thanks.
Gary
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