I liked it as much as your axe poem. Don't think it needs much more work.
Colin
PS don't know if you know it, but there is a poem by Louis McNiece, elegy
for silver poets, or something similar which is tangential to your poem.
----- Original Message -----
From: "Sue Scalf" <[log in to unmask]>
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Sent: Monday, July 28, 2003 11:03 PM
Subject: Re: An Unknown Poet (wip) (Colin)
> Thank you, Colin. I like your "to" suggestion. As you will see, I did
do
> some revision. Wip means work in progress, which could be said about me,
too.
> (smile) Sue
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