In a message dated 07/29/2003 8:48:09 AM Central Daylight Time,
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<< A triangular flap
Tied to waist
His sole attire
With circular swings
And spiral ascents
He danced with Nature
Dham dhamak dhum.
>> By the way, I think this would make a better opening stanza so we have a
visual picture. End with the moonlight image and make that one your last
stanza.
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