Of course Gary - thanks. Now why didn't I think of that?
Sarah
----- Original Message -----
From: "Gary Blankenship" <[log in to unmask]>
To: <[log in to unmask]>
Sent: Wednesday, July 16, 2003 4:21 PM
Subject: Re: The Slowworm's tail - Christina and rewrite
Sarah, consider ending at
For impossible minutes she watches,
as it writhes through the dust, aware
only that it is not whole.
and moving the questions to a stand alone S3
What creature cast it off to save itself?
Which severed part suffers greater pain?
Where does it find such energy,
when its heart is gone?
Thanks.
Gary
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