I am inclined to agree with what has been already said in others comment of
this poem, James. The poem itself is clear and you paint an interesting
scene, I can almost picture it - as I live quite close to the estuary of
the River Wyre on the Fylde Coast.
There are a couple of typos in the poem, not much you can do about that
here, but if you have not spotted them in your original piece then they
need to be attended to.
>>>I can see that the river (befor) me - before
>>>(liike) these tracks, with the next tide. - like
Nice work I enjoyed the read.
Thanks
Mary
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