Hi Bob,
It is ratehr interesting, isn't it (now that you've pointed it out). Where
the narrator is using 'you' it seems to be almost an instruction - 'if you
glance to the left, you will notice ...', where 'we' is used, it seems more
an invitation to share an intimacy, or establish collegiate association.
I think it is important - can't really imagine it differently and am not
unhappy with the way they play in my head, but thanks so much for pointing
it out - I simply wan't aware.
Glad the images were strong enough to stick with you for awhile, hopefully
that's a good thing. I read them and a couple of others from the series at
open-mike yesterday, and they seemed to be received pretty well.
Cheers and thanks,
Frank
> Hi Frank,
> These are interesting... and memorable. I had a train journey or two
earlier
> this week and couldn't get the images out of my head!
> I'm intruiged that the first and last ones are about "you" and the middle
> one us about "us." I'm wondering how important that is...
> Bob
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