Frank Faust wrote:
> the best lies
> are big ones
> the best place to hide
> is in the open
:: Lacks punch
> king tide moon
>
> once every month
> the roaring grows
> to occupy a louder place
> in the mind :: ("louder" for want of a better word?)
> the moon hangs
> large and full
> almost close enough ::("almost" can be dropped. disturbs rythm as well)
> to touch
>
> tugs at people
> paints them pagan
>
> louder
> closer
>
> that's when you'll know them :: (not clear)
> under a close moon
> at king tide
>
> ~
>
> was that a nuance or ...
>
> it's either a present
> or the pox
> never in between
>
> the most special
> the unclean
>
> hug it to yourself
> and walk on air
> step careful
> avoid land mines
>
> smile private
> and strip search
> every nuance
>
> live it on the edge
>
> oh yes :: (some dos and don'ts!)
>
> ~
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