I think this one is very funny aand I don't think there is any problem with
the subject matter
It is very much how word-people reflect.
bw
SallyE
on 28/6/03 11:25 am, James Bell at [log in to unmask] wrote:
> I was a little hestant to post this one, though I now have. It was to do
> with the subject matter though I'm sure you'd all accept that we can write
> poems about anything. I'd really like to know what people think on this one
> as it came very unexpected. I can't spell sibilance by the way.
>
> MATERIAL EVIDENCE
>
> Walk along the crowded road
> through the heaving market
> on my way to the river
> behind this guy who is built
> like a brick shithouse
>
> There is plenty of time
> to think why I should even
> consider how this phrase
> comes to mind while looking
> at his vast bulk
> and what an actual
> brick shithouse would look like
>
> I mean - why brick
> why not tin or pre-stressed concrete -
> and decide it must be
> the assonance and slight sybilance of
> brick shithouse
> who, by the way
> wears a t-shirt
> displaying a WWF wrestler in action
> and I start to wonder -
> as panic takes over
> when I decide to turn an unnecessary corner
> to at least see daylight again -
> if such constructions
> can read minds
>
>
>
>
> bw
> James
>
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