Thank you for the input; I'll have a look.
kol tuv, Ryfkah
In a message dated 06.28.03 3:40:47 AM, [log in to unmask] writes:
<< Hi Ryfkah,
This is great. I love the composite words, though only stopped for a second
to wonder at their purpose, perhaps the rapid passage of time. Just one
little bit in s1 where "stands silent" follows on to "love" where I felt
there was not a smooth line change and felt it needed breaking up some way
to make sense.
bw
James >>
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