Hi james,
Tnaks for commenting. I've still got to work the piece over, but Scott made
a number of suggestions that should be helpful.
Cheers,
Frank
> HiFrank,
> Yes, I see your problems but don't see the resolutions clearly. Perhaps a
> general tightening up on your naturally loose style to bring it less under
> the auspices of the proesy label. I feel somethings are perhaps overstated
> too, which is the risk of your conversational approach. Hope this helps.
As
> I say I'm as befuddled as you are here.
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> bw
> James
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