you seem to infer (sometimes when I read
it) that your bowl of "cereals" with milk and sugar is a thin gruel compared
to his food. But such a start to the day (start to writing, seeing and
valuing things, whatever...) is so good in itself. I wonder if it were
possible to maybe say something less deprecating at the end. I do get a
feeling, from his writing, he was the kind of guy who'd be more pleased with
your pleasures. His poems certainly make me taste things sweeter, clearer,
so perhaps I'm trying to slap my ending on your poem.
Bob
Bob
His output was massive compared to mine, but perhaps if milk was cream?
I was also taken by the fact that his wife was making pies the day he died -
that they lived the land.
Thanks.
Smiles.
Gary
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