Thanks Bob, you are very kind.
bw
James
>From: Bob Cooper <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Re: New Sub: A Word
>Date: Sat, 21 Jun 2003 11:59:17 +0000
>
>Hi James,
>I like this, too! You can handle a short line well.
>How would this work with some punctuation? (maybe somewhere between
>"better"
>and "the same," I guess...)
>Bob
>
>
>>From: James Bell <[log in to unmask]>
>>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>>To: [log in to unmask]
>>Subject: New Sub: A Word
>>Date: Fri, 20 Jun 2003 15:29:02 +0000
>>
>>a word
>>
>>
>>we met at the
>>bp chemical plant
>>with vast vats
>>that contained
>>liquids that
>>he said
>>was delaquiscent
>>
>>what a word
>>delaquiscent
>>
>>so eloquent
>>for a place with
>>pipes like endless
>>snakes with stinking
>>steam and tanks
>>of arcane fluid
>>that were
>>of course
>>delaquescent
>>
>>that was
>>a longtimeago
>>in a place so
>>technical
>>it was wordles
>>except for
>>this one
>>that
>>came from his lips
>>with respect
>>with awe
>>or was it just
>>the one that
>> functioned
>>best
>>for its sound
>>its multi-syllabic
>>sweep
>>that was inclusive
>>enough to include
>>what was needed
>>from a suction
>> machine
>>
>>now there's a word -
>>suction
>>
>>
>>
>>bw
>>James
>>
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