James, well written, but here
liquids that
he said
was delaquiscent
what a word
delaquiscent
so eloquent
for a place with
I would drop S2 and redo the next as
such an eloquent word
for a place with
I would also go for longer lines, that and that was as lines do not work for
me. The read is not smooth to me
that was pause a longtimeago pause in a place do pause etc
Thanks.
Gary
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