Hi Sue,
As usual your suggestions help me, always;
I appreciate your comments and corrections.
c s s
===============
Sue Scalf wrote:
> << First Encounter
>
> She was short of breath
> from climbing that steep hill,
> but sweat added lustre
> to her flushed face.
>
...
...
> I made a few little changes to smooth out the language. Hope this helps. Sue
|