A good message, but I find the line "albeit it changed its form" to be awkward. Too many IT's. You might consider using a less common phrase than "we sobbed in silence" as well.
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DATE: Fri, 13 Jun 2003 21:43:33
From: c s shah <[log in to unmask]>
To: [log in to unmask]
Cc:
>It's same either way
>
>You came in my life
>like a magician, but
>the problem remained,
>albeit it changed its form.
>We sobbed in silence
>and in silence we laughed;
>you said rabbit is illusory
>and I said so is the hat.
>--
>
>c s shah
>
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