Hi shah,
3 poems then... (cheeky, that, putting three on one post!)
I think I like the 3rd one best.
Which doesn't mean the first two don't work well in their own ways! But the
1st and 2nd don't seem to evoke a "yes!" - they seem to offer me images I
have to think about too much (and, at the end of my thinking, I'm not as
intuitively thrilled as I am with the third one).
Bob
>From: c s shah <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
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>Subject: Re: NEW: Tidbits2
>Date: Mon, 9 Jun 2003 22:39:07 +0530
>
>Hi Bob,
>These are three different poems, if one can call them 'poems'!
>c s shah
>
>Bob Cooper wrote:
>>Hi Shah,
>>Are these three different poems - or parts of the same one?
>>Bob
>
>>>
>>>Tidbits 2
>>>
>>>Clouds gather
>>>and pacify a child
>>>with a rainbow toy.
>>>--
>>>A girl zooms high
>>>and low
>>>on a swing of a
>>>rainbow.
>>>--
>>>Chandeliers sleep
>>>as mother sings
>>>a lullaby of stars.
>>>--
>>>
>>>c s shah
>>
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