You know me Insect I rarely find fault with your work. I am not even sure
now whether it is a question of grammar or style but I wonder if some of the
'ors' in the first strophe should be 'nors'.
The rest of the poem is a cruel tease and as such up to scratch. Arthur.
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From: "grasshopper" <[log in to unmask]>
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Sent: Wednesday, January 15, 2003 4:57 PM
Subject: New sub:Sex Kitten
> Sex Kitten
>
> She loves dating older men.
> It's not their experience
> or their intelligent conversation,
> not just the fact they don't understand
> going Dutch, and the rumpy-plumpy
> of their wallets,
> or the way they pull back chairs
> and open doors.
>
> It's mainly for that moment
> when they unveil Tintin and Snowy
> and she gets to take a good long look
> and say,
> Have you heard of Grecian 2000?
>
> as if for the very first time.
>
> (grasshopper)
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