Hi Bob,
Thanks; I agree with you; my poems are a bit too explanatory.
As if I am not sure whether I have conveyed what I wanted to.
Thus, I am also never entirely satisfied with what I accomplish.
Therefore I like your comment about omitting the last line.
It has given me an insight in my attempt.
Thanks again,
c s shah
Bob Cooper wrote:
> Hi Shah,
> Welcome back!
> A comment about the 2nd one...and its last two lines!
> I'm wondering if the last line is needed? If it were omitted then the
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