In a message dated 05.28.03 6:36:34 AM, [log in to unmask] writes:
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But I am about to leave this poem
and journey to the region that is not a place, >>
I like the poem that bounces off a very thoughtful quote. I don't think you
need these lines above; they tell the reader. I think these lines are fresh:
The night is barely a breath
between the hammer strokes of day.
kol tuv, Ryfkah
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