Thank you Sue for your honest thoughts.
kol tuv, Ryfkah
In a message dated 05.25.03 11:27:09 AM, [log in to unmask] writes:
<< I think you did a good job on this one, but it didn't work for me for a
very
simple reason. I find myself shying away from poems that have a political
bias or a political purpose. I guess I feel I am being used. I think the
word
"occupation" was the word that got my dander up. Sorry. As a I said, for its
purpose the poem was a good one. Sue >>
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