Hi Frank,
No quibs at all in this one apart from it not having a title. Can I suggest
something like "Exhibit A" .
bw
James
>From: Frank Faust <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: sub - untitled - a
>Date: Fri, 23 May 2003 18:13:43 +1000
>
>untitled - a
>
>he said
>I know it's crazy
>but she was the first one that I saw
>in oh so long
>I almost fell right on the spot
>could have asked her there and then
>to touch me
>had to fight to hold back my hands
>
>from reaching out
>to stroke her skin
>I knew
>what I would feel
>like she had an aura
>and I had an aura
>as though
>we were meant to come together
>but I
>
>he said
>I wonder what she's doing now
>if she felt the thing
>that I did
>I never asked her
>never spoke
>I never saw her again
>but think about that feeling
>and wonder
>
>I work my way to nighttime
>and I wonder
>
>~
>
>Frank
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