Hello Barabara,
Thanks for your comments. I´m glad this piece gave you a laugh.
Best wishes, Mike
Mike, I apologize for being so slow in responding to this piece. I found it
great fun in it's silliness and undercurrents. I laughed aloud several times
and by the end was totally delighted. I am amazed at such creative powers,
how you got from "A" to "Z", I cannot even imagine. It reminds me of another
poem I read once about pulling a lose string on this guy's body and it falling
completely apart, eyes rolling this way, arms and legs suddenly unattached, the
panic of the lover, and how she figured out how to get it back together, etc.
I am not doing it justice, of course. It was amazing, and I sat there in
wonder of the initial idea and thought. Same with this one. I can see that I
will have to let my mind go more completely, how we are trained from early on
to think in the box, create in the box and how dull we can be.
Thank you for the great read. I have no idea how to crit it, wouldn't want
to try, I enjoyed being swept along too much.
Way to go,
Barbara
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