Morning Ryfkah! You are up late!! Thanks for the read. I am making some
minor adjustments. Typos as much as anything. We all have our Proustian
madelienes I think. Regards Arthur.
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From: "Ryfkah *" <[log in to unmask]>
To: <[log in to unmask]>
Sent: Saturday, May 17, 2003 11:27 AM
Subject: Re: New sub: Butterscotch
In a message dated 05.17.03 12:16:00 AM, [log in to unmask] writes:
<< Cloven hoofs on cobbles chime through all those early days,
when my world was shared with some wan Eve;
a stick of rock with ‘Wonder’ all the way through. >>
These lines are precious. The poem works or me, King Arthur. I can
experience the boy fully through your words.
kol tuv, Ryfkah
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