Hi Ryfkah
The soft of your nipple
Should that be the HARD of your nipple, given the circumstances?!
Also the bats - Carl has picked this up, but where do they fit in?
I don't really object to the bats but the next line reads as if you are
describing the bats as late returning birds. Am I the only person to
take this reading from it?
STEVE
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Subject: New: Trust
Trust
The soft of your nipple feels better
than the touch of a Persian
silk rug he murmurs
She dangles her amber hair
like a veiled woman
He promises paradise like
cherry blossoms in spring
The sky silhouettes with bats
late returning birds
They brush finger to finger
gentle as the dusk light
He kisses her third eye
She sighs
wonders if trust is possible
Ryfkah 5/10/03
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